El que traigo hoy es en inglés (qué queréis que os diga, lo hice para inglés xD). Si tenéis algún problema por la comprensión o algo perdonadme, pedidme que os traduzca lo que sea y si no os lo traduzco entero, no pasa nada :3
As she came closer, the temperature dropped, trying
to freeze the last bit of strength in her body. Due to the cloudy atmosphere, she
was unable to see too many details, yet she could distinguish the small
silhouettes of the seagulls flying above. There were no more than six people on
the whole beach.
Once she arrived, she just stood there, her
hands in her pockets. The wind seemed determined to blow her away; the cry of a
seagull made her jump, as if the whole beach accused her, wanting her to go
away from its secrets. And then an empty, dreadful and threatening silence.
When she approached the port, though, the chilling laugh of the children
playing there danced in her head - God, how she hated those little beasts. They
ran around over the dull, grey sand, under the vigilant eye of their mothers,
so noisy, so dependent.
Samantha watched them in silence, feeling the icy
breeze carelessly bite every bit of skin that wasn't covered. How could they be
so painfully energetic? Although she was far away, she could almost see the
women's faces - dark marks under their eyes, tired expressions, smiles that
tried to cover the lack of sleep. They had given their life away just to bring
up small, malicious creatures which would only cause them worries, worries,
worries. Their tiny feet crushed against the sand, one two, one two, so
stridently wild, so rhythmically irritating.
There was something so wrong with that fragile
child, standing gently against the howling wind, like a bamboo cane in the
middle of a reckless storm. He was out of place, all alone, messing with the
waves while the other children played and laughed and shrieked, as savagely as
she had always remembered. How did he come to exist, so still, so patient in
the middle of that chaos, awakening her curiosity instead of her disgust - that
she didn't know; but then, she guessed she would have to discover.
*Gracias a mi profesor por corregirlo jejeje xD* Básicamente es una descripción porque era lo que nos pedían, si queréis que escriba un relato más largo a partir de esto, pedídmelo y ya está, que no muerdo (solo mordí a mi hermana una vez de pequeña xD lol) El caso, que así tengo algo de lo que escribir en esta sección... si os gusta, claro :P
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